Overall I think the feedback was very positive, and the negative points I think are just personal opinions. I am very pleased with how our project went and I can't to do it again because I think we will use the negative points and the possible improvements to make it even better.
Improvements
Good Points
Sob story believable and appropriate for the X Factor.
Good link between bracelet and brother.
Good idea for props.
Good idea for props.
Good detail in hair.
Good detail.
Good detailed costume etc. Research becomes more detailed/explained further on.
Good detail.
Good detailed costume etc. Research becomes more detailed/explained further on.
Good use of sketches.
Good sketches of music video concept.
Photos/Images/Drawings really good.
Love music video storyboard.
Nice storyboard.
Good sketches of music video concept.
Photos/Images/Drawings really good.
Love music video storyboard.
Nice storyboard.
Good use of pictures - taken own photos - good effort.
Good effort with pictures.
Social media etc. is so successful.
Album cover, tour dates and social media is ace.
Good website idea.
Good newspaper headlines.
Good effort with pictures.
Social media etc. is so successful.
Album cover, tour dates and social media is ace.
Good website idea.
Good newspaper headlines.
Maybe keep level of detail consistent?Could have gone into detail about other artists.
Negative Points
Negative Points
Sob story is too 'sobby' Rosie needs to focus on one disaster at a time.
Sob story a bit too overdone.
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