Constructing an Indie Artist: Feedback!

This is the feedback we got on our video we did for constructing an Indie artist.

• 'Brings a tear to my eye'.
• Very in depth and lots of detail.
• Very good idea and good points made.
• The presentation of it as a video is impressive, away from the ordinary styles of write-up presentation.
• Good music video idea - original.
• Good use of photos.
• Could use more subtitles as well as talking.
• Clothes could be seen as mainstream.
• Voice and pictures are a bit fast so a bit hard to follow at some points.